Bonsoir j'ai besoin d'aide en anglais! Quelqu'un peux me corrige, me dire si c'est juste et cohérent tous ce que j'ai écris, si n'il y a pas d'erreur enfin vous

Bonsoir j'ai besoin d'aide en anglais! Quelqu'un peux me corrige, me dire si c'est juste et cohérent tous ce que j'ai écris, si n'il y a pas d'erreur enfin vous m'avez compris mdr! Merci d'avance. "This document is a photograph. In the picture, "A Picnic at the Border", i can see in the middle a table with two eyes and i can see one wall. In the top, in the left side and in the right side, i can see a lot of people. The People are around the eyes and it are eating on the table, it's a picnic. I think that the immigrants is on the left side and the and the californie is on the right side. I think that photograph was taked in the desert because i can see . The wall separate the table in two part, that left and that right. In my opinion, the people reunited next to the border for have a good time and for forgetten the wall. I am convinced that the people is happy of share this meal. This photograph was taked between Mexico and the U.S. The immigrants can not pass the border because there is a wall who separate the Mexico and the U.S and there is a "border-patrol"."