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Dite moi si mon texte est bon :
Hello, I'm ..., I'm 25 years old. I love animals that's why I want to work with nature. I like to be with nature. After passing my degree with a very good mention, I will be able to work. My first workplacement was very good. Take care of the chicken and fruits and vegetables. I'm determined and my skills are good.

All my greetings and thanks cordialy ...

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  • Cc.

    C'est mieux que vous mettez hello,my name is ... car il ya un répétition i'm et i'm

    Après c'est bon je crois.

    Voilà

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